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The attic is low and warm and full of things. There are a lot of boxes, and everything is covered in dust and bits of insulation. Some logs are shoved into a corner. A pile of shoes is piled up almost to the roof. | The attic is low and warm and full of things. There are a lot of boxes, and everything is covered in dust and bits of insulation. Some logs are shoved into a corner. A pile of shoes is piled up almost to the roof. | ||
Coraline shines her torch about as they come up, hunching over to fit. | Coraline shines her torch about as they come up, hunching over to fit. Ash demons drift away from her torch. | ||
Agata trots ahead, poking about. | Agata trots ahead, poking about. | ||
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They head toward the general area over room 2. | They head toward the general area over room 2. | ||
Coraline checks behind boxes as they go. Shadows jump away from her torch. Wintersday decorations sparkle sharply. A broken rocking chair throws jagged shadows. Crystalised beads of pitch glitter on the rafters. A well looms up out of the gloom, a bucket on a rope spilled next to it in a large puddle. | Coraline checks behind boxes as they go. Shadows jump away from her torch, a few hissing in irritation. Wintersday decorations sparkle sharply. A broken rocking chair throws jagged shadows. Crystalised beads of pitch glitter on the rafters. A well looms up out of the gloom, a bucket on a rope spilled next to it in a large puddle. | ||
Coraline scoots up to the well and stares at it blankly. | Coraline scoots up to the well and stares at it blankly. | ||
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They look at it, look some more, look around, look at it some more, and then look at each other. | They look at it, look some more, look around, look at it some more, and then look at each other. | ||
Some fairies look at them too, poking around from behind the rocks. | |||
ERRY | ERRY | ||
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Coraline stops and stares at Agata. | Coraline stops and stares at Agata. | ||
Behind them and around, river sprites dart in and out of the waves. | |||
A drowner climbs up onto the rocks by Coraline's feet and hugs her legs. A couple of others start climbing up as well again. | A drowner climbs up onto the rocks by Coraline's feet and hugs her legs. A couple of others start climbing up as well again. | ||
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CORALINE | CORALINE | ||
{{idioma|Go back to sleep. Okay? Just go back to sleep. I can't help you.}} | {{idioma|Go back to sleep. Okay? Just go back to sleep. I can't help you.|dead}} | ||
The drowners continue to stare up at her out of the water, then slowly, first only a couple, then more and more of them all at once, sink down into the water. Mostly they just disappear into the murk, but a few fall apart entirely, drifting away with the current in pieces. | The drowners continue to stare up at her out of the water, then slowly, first only a couple, then more and more of them all at once, sink down into the water. Mostly they just disappear into the murk, but a few fall apart entirely, drifting away with the current in pieces. | ||
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When she continues downriver, using a stick for a paddle, pushing her way around rocks, only Agata is out in the boat with her. | When she continues downriver, using a stick for a paddle, pushing her way around rocks, only Agata is out in the boat with her. | ||
The drowners remain under the water, almost as if they were not there. | The drowners remain under the water, almost as if they were not there. The river sprites avoid them, sticking to the shallows. | ||
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A Deathdealer, VARDAMAN, is at the bar. He has swords and armour and all the usual things, and long silver hair tied back in a ponytail. He also has a drink, which at the moment seems to be the single most important thing in his life. | A Deathdealer, VARDAMAN, is at the bar. He has swords and armour and all the usual things, and long silver hair tied back in a ponytail. He also has a drink, which at the moment seems to be the single most important thing in his life. | ||
Ash demons float lethargically by some of the walls, and over a few particular tables and stools. | |||
Nobody looks up as Coraline clomps in and drops her bag on the bar, taking a seat nearby, leaving an empty seat between them. | Nobody looks up as Coraline clomps in and drops her bag on the bar, taking a seat nearby, leaving an empty seat between them. | ||
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IT WAS TED! | IT WAS TED! | ||
This apparently pisses everyone off, and the fight breaks out in full. People punch each other, pick up chairs, and push and shove. | This apparently pisses everyone off, and the fight breaks out in full. People punch each other, pick up chairs, and push and shove. Ash demons dart in and out of it, playfully, dancingly. | ||
Coraline and Vardaman turn to watch, and Coraline slips off her stool, getting up entirely. | Coraline and Vardaman turn to watch, and Coraline slips off her stool, getting up entirely. | ||
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Vardaman shoves her away in surprise, backing into the bar, and grabs a knife out of his boot. | Vardaman shoves her away in surprise, backing into the bar, and grabs a knife out of his boot. | ||
Coraline turns into the chaos of the dying barfight that's suddenly all around her, and grabs a random guy and devours his soul, tearing it away in faint swathes of glimmering light. It holds him up even as his legs give out under him, and then it's gone, and he collapses before her like a sack of joints. | Coraline turns into the chaos of the dying barfight that's suddenly all around her, sucks an ash demon right into nothing, and then grabs a random guy and devours his soul as well, tearing it away in faint swathes of glimmering light. It holds him up even as his legs give out under him, and then it's gone, and he collapses before her like a sack of joints. | ||
Around them, the chaos dies down all too abruptly as a few folks stop and stare, and others run away. A few jostle. The barkeeper runs after someone else, not paying attention. | Around them, the chaos dies down all too abruptly as a few folks stop and stare, and others run away. A few jostle. The barkeeper runs after someone else, not paying attention. | ||
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Coraline tries to focus through the pain and general fuzz to heal herself, but whatever it is she normally uses to do this, she just can't seem to find it. Her hand twitches like she should be using it. | Coraline tries to focus through the pain and general fuzz to heal herself, but whatever it is she normally uses to do this, she just can't seem to find it. Her hand twitches like she should be using it. | ||
She can feel Vardaman behind her. She can feel the horse beneath her. Other shapes lings around too, vague, further off. She reaches into Vardaman, sensing for his hurt, for anything she can use. Overall there is very little. A weariness, gnawing and uncertain, lingering in the back of his mind. | She can feel Vardaman behind her. She can feel the horse beneath her. Other shapes lings around too, vague, further off. She reaches into Vardaman, sensing for his hurt, for anything she can use. Overall there is very little. A weariness, gnawing and uncertain, lingering in the back of his mind. A tiring, his arms beginning to ache from the strain of holding her up. And something else, too, unlike anything she's sensed in anyone else... | ||
She focuses on his arms, tries to sooth the ache, pushing it down, flattening it out. It fades, just as she would have expected. | She focuses on his arms, tries to sooth the ache, pushing it down, flattening it out. It fades, just as she would have expected. | ||
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She chases it around for a bit regardless. | She chases it around for a bit regardless. | ||
Suddenly Vardaman is lifting her off the horse again for another rest. It's later in the day. Birds are being loud and obnoxious around. | Suddenly Vardaman is lifting her off the horse again for another rest. It's later in the day. Birds are being loud and obnoxious around. Ash demons drift around the edges of the clearing, avoiding Vardaman. | ||
Vardaman ties her arms up between two trees this time. Coraline sits, resting her head on her arm, vaguely wiping at her hair, trying to get it out of her face. | Vardaman ties her arms up between two trees this time. Coraline sits, resting her head on her arm, vaguely wiping at her hair, trying to get it out of her face. | ||
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''Oh, shut up. | ''Oh, shut up. | ||
They continue on. The day goes on. The woods break up in favour of rolling hills. Coraline watches them vaguely, wondering what they might become. | They continue on. The day goes on. The woods break up in favour of rolling hills. Frost moulds grow across the rocks and trees, creeping slowly. Coraline watches them vaguely, wondering what they might become. | ||
Another voice resonates in Coraline's head, like Agata's, but this one is male, someone she does not recognise. | Another voice resonates in Coraline's head, like Agata's, but this one is male, someone she does not recognise. | ||
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EXT. Soravian countryside - day | EXT. Soravian countryside - day | ||
The next two days pass slowly and painfully. The hills roll in and out of forests as they slowly gain elevation, continuing westward and north, approaching the mountains. Vardaman continues to hold Coraline in front of him as they ride on, tying her to trees when they rest, giving her vodka periodically with her food. He does not seem to sleep himself. | The next two days pass slowly and painfully. The hills roll in and out of forests as they slowly gain elevation, continuing westward and north, approaching the mountains. Ash demons and ghostlights flit about, but flee at their approach. Vardaman continues to hold Coraline in front of him as they ride on, tying her to trees when they rest, giving her vodka periodically with her food. He does not seem to sleep himself. | ||
Coraline's bindings only become more painful, even as she continues to heal her arms from time to time. | Coraline's bindings only become more painful, even as she continues to heal her arms from time to time. | ||
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Off to the side, the boy in green jumps from sofa to sofa, tossing around swaths of colour, which shimmer and fade behind him. He whoops, misses a sofa, and falls to the floor. | Off to the side, the boy in green jumps from sofa to sofa, tossing around swaths of colour, which shimmer and fade behind him. He whoops, misses a sofa, and falls to the floor. | ||
The boy jumps back up again a moment later, looking around a bit in | The boy jumps back up again a moment later, looking around a bit in embarrassment. When he sees the Voice and Coraline looking toward him, he waves. | ||
BOY IN GREEN | BOY IN GREEN | ||
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Coraline finds herself in the centre, and glances around, but she is still alone. There is no sign of the Voice, nor anyone else of interest. | Coraline finds herself in the centre, and glances around, but she is still alone. There is no sign of the Voice, nor anyone else of interest. | ||
She closes her eyes. She feels the fire, waiting, and brings it out, | She closes her eyes. She feels the fire, waiting, and brings it out, focusing it in her hands, balling it up in front of her, until it's almost too much for her to bear. She throws it out in every direction with a scream, and the flames explode around her, billowing out, before fading into nothing. | ||
She pauses, and then lashes out with an arm, slicing the air with a finger, directing a lash of fire beyond it. She does another, and another, and another, dancing about, painting the air with slashes of fire that trail behind her and die. | She pauses, and then lashes out with an arm, slicing the air with a finger, directing a lash of fire beyond it. She does another, and another, and another, dancing about, painting the air with slashes of fire that trail behind her and die. | ||
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She returns to the Grey Lobby a few times, but only finds it empty, or sometimes with other Keepers in. She avoids the others, taking it as a small escape, a simple place where she can be free. She sees the boy in green again, and together they practice magic. | She returns to the Grey Lobby a few times, but only finds it empty, or sometimes with other Keepers in. She avoids the others, taking it as a small escape, a simple place where she can be free. She sees the boy in green again, and together they practice magic. | ||
The voices whisper as the sun gets lower. Coraline tries to scratch her arse on the saddle even as Vardaman continues to restrain her. It doesn't work. | The voices whisper as the sun gets lower. Ghostlights go silent and flee before them. | ||
Coraline tries to scratch her arse on the saddle even as Vardaman continues to restrain her. | |||
It doesn't work. | |||
Agata hisses behind them. | Agata hisses behind them. | ||
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EXT. Soravian village - afternoon | EXT. Soravian village - afternoon | ||
Vardaman and Coraline ride into a small village nestled in the foothills. Villagers stop and peer at them curiously as they pass. | Vardaman and Coraline ride into a small village nestled in the foothills. Villagers stop and peer at them curiously as they pass. A group of housemites gathers and dances in front of the horses, and then scatters when Vardaman doesn't stop. | ||
A child starts to go to them, but then its mother runs after, puts a restraining hand on its shoulder, and guides it back inside. | A child starts to go to them, but then its mother runs after, puts a restraining hand on its shoulder, and guides it back inside. | ||
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{{idioma|Perkele.}} | {{idioma|Perkele.}} | ||
The horse proceeds to jump over some more, smaller, obstacles as well, but Coraline sticks the landing better on these. | The horse proceeds to jump over some more, smaller, obstacles as well, but Coraline sticks the landing much better on these. | ||
Coraline glances back momentarily as they pass the last couple of houses, but for the moment, there's no sign of further pursuit. | Coraline glances back momentarily as they pass the last couple of houses, but for the moment, there's no sign of further pursuit. | ||
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It would have to be, unless he's... also using magic. And he's got two horses, so that could make it even easier... bloody damn. Okay. | It would have to be, unless he's... also using magic. And he's got two horses, so that could make it even easier... bloody damn. Okay. | ||
Coraline guides the horse to stop in a dark stand of trees. | Coraline guides the horse to stop in a dark stand of trees. Frost moulds on their branches form little flowers, covering the few remaining leaves. | ||
Agata crawls out of the bag like a bird emerging from a dead beetle. | Agata crawls out of the bag like a bird emerging from a dead beetle. | ||
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INT. Bag | INT. Bag | ||
It's akin to a decent-sized room, several metres across and over two metres tall. Junk is everywhere. Bedding and barrels are scattered about at random. Several bags are affixed to the top near the opening, and several bats are hanging off of those. A pile of camping stuff, dirty clothes, and empty bottles has accumulated on top of several hap-hazard stacks of books, and Coraline winds up draped rather indecently over that. | It's akin to a decent-sized room, several metres across and over two metres tall. Junk is everywhere. Bedding and barrels are scattered about at random. Several bags are affixed to the top near the opening, and several bats are hanging off of those. Ash demons are everywhere, drifting, floating, hanging to the sides of things. A pile of camping stuff, dirty clothes, and empty bottles has accumulated on top of several hap-hazard stacks of books, and Coraline winds up draped rather indecently over that. | ||
It is utterly, utterly dark, and surprisingly warm. | It is utterly, utterly dark, and surprisingly warm. | ||
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EXT. Soravian wilderness - early morning | EXT. Soravian wilderness - early morning | ||
Coraline gets up quickly, using her staff as a prop, grabbing a bottle, shoving cats in her bag. She looks around, but there's no sign of anything amiss. | Coraline gets up quickly, using her staff as a prop, grabbing a bottle, shoving cats in her bag. Ash demons drift lazily away. She looks around, but there's no sign of anything amiss. | ||
CORALINE | CORALINE | ||
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# ''There are no mountains in Finland. | # ''There are no mountains in Finland. | ||
# ''Placeholder languages may be chosen/generated by automated processes. | # ''Placeholder languages may be chosen/generated by automated processes. | ||
# ''To say '{{idioma|kauhistuksen kanahäkki}}' may apply. | |||
=== Surface === | === Surface === | ||
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Coraline awakens in the tall dry grass, tied to a tree much as before, but now also gagged, her mouth covered, a cloth shoved in such that she cannot close it or move her tongue at all. She gags on the gag, trying to vomit, but it doesn't work. Instead she chokes, the vomit going up her nose, painfully, drowningly. She struggles futilely. | Coraline awakens in the tall dry grass, tied to a tree much as before, but now also gagged, her mouth covered, a cloth shoved in such that she cannot close it or move her tongue at all. She gags on the gag, trying to vomit, but it doesn't work. Instead she chokes, the vomit going up her nose, painfully, drowningly. She struggles futilely. | ||
Vardaman casts a quick spell over Coraline. | Vardaman casts a quick spell over Coraline. Her staff is slung over Vardaman's shoulder. Her bag is in his belt. | ||
Agata and Argument of Hags are around. | |||
VARDAMAN | VARDAMAN | ||
{{incantation|bury thunder always.}} | {{incantation|bury thunder always.}} | ||
Vardaman pulls out the gag and cloth and Coraline pukes on her lap, instead, straining against the burning in her nose | Vardaman pulls out the gag and cloth and Coraline pukes on her lap, instead, straining against the burning in her nose. | ||
VARDAMAN | VARDAMAN | ||
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Coraline nearly chokes again. | Coraline nearly chokes again. | ||
AGATA | |||
(mind voice) | |||
''I won't even be Captain Obvious today. | |||
VARDAMAN | VARDAMAN | ||
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For a time, Coraline simply waits, looking out over the brown landscape and barren trees, just focusing on breathing. Then she closes her eyes, and looks properly out at the world without them. | For a time, Coraline simply waits, looking out over the brown landscape and barren trees, just focusing on breathing. Then she closes her eyes, and looks properly out at the world without them. | ||
Everything is dark, thin. The landscape shows itself as edges, smears, ghosts of trees and rocks. The sky is a void, hungering, lingering. Behind it all, stars poke through, ancient and terrible, singing. Sand trickles, hinting, whispering. Points of light distort the edges, trailing their essence behind them. A bird in the sky becomes a simple smear. Larger animals, huddled down, give off distorted glows. | Everything is dark, thin. The landscape shows itself as edges, smears, ghosts of trees and rocks. The sky is a void, hungering, lingering. Behind it all, stars poke through, ancient and terrible, singing. Sand trickles, hinting, whispering. Points of light distort the edges, trailing their essence behind them. A bird in the sky becomes a simple smear. Larger animals, huddled down, give off distorted glows. Sprites glimmer with tenuous light. | ||
Her own self is a darkness to rival the sky. Vardaman is a brightness to rival the sun. The horses and cats are far more normal, simply shapes of horses and cats, glowing beneath her and behind. | Her own self is a darkness to rival the sky. Vardaman is a brightness to rival the sun. The horses and cats are far more normal, simply shapes of horses and cats, glowing beneath her and behind. | ||
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Jora is lying in the sun, her eyes covered with a cloth, ignoring all of this. | Jora is lying in the sun, her eyes covered with a cloth, ignoring all of this. | ||
EXT. Lauhen sea - afternoon | |||
It's bright and sunny. The sky is a grand blue expanse, with even grander, towering cloud masses completely failing to do anything to the sun. | |||
KIT | |||
Look. Clouds. | |||
Erry smacks Kit with a fish. | |||
KIT | |||
Agh! | |||
Nolan hands Kit a fish, and Kit smacks Erry right back. | |||
Jora backs away, and then tries to grab Kit. | |||
Erry smacks Kit even harder, and winds up hitting Jora as well in the process. | |||
Nolan throws a fish at Erry. | |||
Kit smacks Jora with a fish. | |||
JORA | |||
Guys, stop! Stop! | |||
Nolan hands Jora a fish. | |||
Jora looks at it, confused, and gets hit by another fish, and then slaps right back with her own fish. | |||
This goes on for a bit. Sometimes one of them drops their fish, and Nolan passes each of them new fish to replace them. | |||
... | ... | ||
</screenplay> | </screenplay> |
Revision as of 00:09, 6 July 2016
The /heap contains the snippets. This is all draft.
Part n + 1: Calculate ending
The soft vibrating that you feel in your bones, it is nothing more than the humming air, handsaws twanging, cats purring too many to hear. Do you have a problem with silence?
Notes:
- Coraline is a librarian.
- Notes may provide context, but not meaning.
- A 'universe' is an artificial construct.
- Coraline Henderson is dead.
Possibility .30
Part 0: Present introductions
In the year 2028, by the Cerrisian calendar, the crown of Soravia fell, sending the kingdom into chaos and turmoil. As years pass, the ruling Houses struggle for power and influence, making alliances and sending their armies to march and engage in terrible battles. The devastation only spreads, with no end in sight.
But Soravia is large, and many areas remain almost unaffected.
But Soravia is small, and there is no escape within its shores.
Notes:
- The story is always told from perspective. Translations are built in, even gestures.
- This was all planned in retrospect.
- Relative positions are absolute in their primacy.
- Every word was chosen.
- Sisu.
Narrow Escape
A day in the life
Gog handling
Part 1: Initiate precursor events
Everybody is running from something. They may not know it, and they may not fear it, but still they run. Some even run from running itself.
And yet the bullet you're running from is almost never the one that hits you.
Notes:
- Not everything is translated from the original tongues.
- Everything is translated.
- Notes may provide meaning, but not context.
- Insert metaphor as indicated in the instructions.
- Small events gain traction. In time, they may demolish nations. Catch them as they start, and you may miss the true design.
- This is not a kids' story.
Bounty hunter
Preparations unfounded
Edifice
Part 2: Implement split
It began with a promise. It began long before that. Each twist is prefaced by a choice. Each turn presents something new. You choose how to proceed, and sometimes you choose wrong. Sometimes the turn chooses for you. Sometimes the turn chooses wrong.
On a scale of one to invade Russia in the winter, how bad is your idea?
Notes:
- This is a children's story.
- Contradictions belie meaning.
- Some people will always need help. That does not mean they are not worth helping.
- The worlds are circular. You may repeat yourself.
- Things will become clearer as you go.
Aftermath
Exit by fortune
Exit by intent
Waypoints
Part 3: Query dead ends
Life twists and turns. You don't see it coming. That's the whole point, right? One moment everything looks hopeless; the next it's all changed. One little thing turns all of perception on its head.
But despair lingers. The seeds remain, buried.
Falter. Tire. Drink.
And remember.
Notes:
- Cats tolerated.
- Vitoi is the Cerrissian god of Dead Ends. He is the god of other things, and other things, too.
- Relative positions are absolute in their primacy.
- There is a map.
- The Deathdealer has been condemned.
- Who are you, sweetling?
Devolution into madness
Sequestered
Small escapes
Madness
Explanations
Replication
Part 4: Define the open skies
Every prison takes its certain shape. Some cages are gilded, some barren, some empty and dead. Some exist in wilderness, in solitude under the open sky. Some are clear, others not so much. A lifetime spent without purpose. A purgatory awaiting death. A sentence suspended. Painful care taken at every turn.
And yet the bird still sings. It pushes at its cage. It dismantles, slowly, the very nature of its prison.
And then you see the caged bird fly.
Notes:
- In the world of double realities, one narrative is public, and one is real.
- Eapherod has been here all along.
- None of this happened the first time.
- Different things happened the first time.
- Events may repeat themselves, precede their causes, and take different forms in different stories. They are the same events.
- Some languages transcend meaning. They cannot be translated, for they simply are. These are the languages of gods, and of darker things.
Passage
Testing
Escape
Cephalopod encasement
As the bird flies
Part 5: Extend tertiary function
You want the answer? You want the end? There is no answer; there is no end. There is only now. In every instance, now, now, now, ever-changing now. Nothing else matters. There is nothing else.
Enjoy your purgatory of the now.
Notes:
- The Dark Sister is neither living nor dead.
- Let us pretend the whispering is only the desert wind.
- Same flavour, different giraffe.
- There are no mountains in Finland.
- Placeholder languages may be chosen/generated by automated processes.
- To say 'kauhistuksen kanahäkki' may apply.
Surface
Librarian and Library
At sea